The pie chart shows the percentage of persons arrested in the five years ending 1994 and the bar chart shows the most recent reasons for arrest. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart illustrates the proportion of citizens
prisoned
from 1989 to 1994, Verb problem
imprisoned
whereas
the bar chart represents the reasons for their Linking Words
arrest
in recent times.
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, it can be concluded thatLinking Words
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male prisoners were more compared to the Remove the comma
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famales
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families
Both
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the
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genders
were imprisoned mostly because of consuming alcohol in public places.
The survey results were as Use synonyms
such
that, about 32% of the male population was caught by the police during the period. Linking Words
In contrast
, the female prisoners Linking Words
constitutes
to 1/4 th of the male ones approximately.
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genders
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, Linking Words
this
habit was Linking Words
high
in females than the males. About 40% of the ladies were arrested for Correct word choice
higher
this
offence Linking Words
whereas
, in the other gender it was about 30%. Approximately a quarter of male prisoners were arrested as they were caught in a drunk and drive condition. Linking Words
In contrast
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this
offence resulted in the Linking Words
arrest
of about 15% of the opposite class.
The other causes that paved Use synonyms
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way for their Correct article usage
the
arrest
were theft and the breach of Use synonyms
order
, by which identical proportions of Add an article
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genders
were caught by the cops in Use synonyms
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conditions.They Correct article usage
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accounted for about 15% of gents' and about 12% of ladies' imprisonment each. Apart from these, Use synonyms
assaultation
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assault
also
was considered as a background for their Linking Words
arrest
. As women committed most of the physical attacks, they were more arrested Use synonyms
for
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this
reason than males.About 4% to 7% of men and women were arrested as they have not responded well to the police respectively. About 15% to 20% of Linking Words
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genders
were imprisoned for various other reasons.Use synonyms
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