The charts below show the percentage of male and female workers in country A and country B. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided circle graph illustrates the amount of
both
male and female workers
in two countries wich
are named Correct your spelling
which
county
A and Capitalize word
County
country
B .
Capitalize word
Country
Overall
, for workers
of both
genders
Add a comma
genders,
it is clear that
a rising amount of them are in services in both
countries but for agriculture and industry they differ depending on the country
.
Noticably
services Correct your spelling
Noticeably
has
taken a great Change the verb form
have
amount
of Change the quantifier
number
workers
in both
places as about 65% to 49% are in it . As for country
a
agriculture is the second most Capitalize word
A
commen
choice Correct your spelling
common
espeacially
for females but for Correct your spelling
especially
country
b only a couple of males particpate
we can say the same for female Correct your spelling
participate
workers
. However
, for workers
in country
b
many of them are in industry as 32% of men are in it and 11% for women .Add a comma
b,
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words both, workers, country with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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