The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart provides information about how
people
ate regularly fast foods in the USA between 2003 and 2013.
Overall
, the frequency of eating fast foods was once a
week
and once or twice a month
however
only a very small number of
people
reported never eating at fast food restaurants or eating there every
day
. In terms of 2006, the biggest spot of frequent time to eat fast food in America is
people
who eat once a
week
and once or twice a month which was around 30%. The middle position was followed by
people
who attend several times a
week
and a few times a year which was about 17%
while
the lowest position who eat every
day
and never around 4%. Focusing on 2006, the biggest percentage who order fast food once a
week
around 33%, continued with several a
week
around 16% and every
day
made up about 3%. Moving to 2013,
people
who visited in the restaurants came
for
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once or twice a month about 33%,
while
a few times a year 15% and the lowest who visited every
day
was around 2 or 3 per cent.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words people, week, day with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 5 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fast food consumption
  • dining frequency
  • decade overview
  • trend analysis
  • to dine out
  • fluctuation
  • sharp increase
  • gradual decline
  • eating habits
  • statistical comparison
  • consuming pattern
  • noteworthy change
  • anomaly
  • periodic comparison
  • data interpretation
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