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The bar chart below shows current health expenditure totals as percentages of GDP* for various European countries for the years 2002, 2007 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. * GDP (Gross Domestic Product) is the total value of goods that are made and services that are provided in a country.

The bar chart below shows current health expenditure totals as percentages of GDP* for various European countries for the years 2002, 2007 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. * GDP (Gross Domestic Product) is the total value of goods that are made and services that are provided in a country.
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The bar chart illustrates the European health expenditures as
percentage
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 of Gross Domestic Product during three years ( 2002,2007 and 2012).
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that the ratio GDP in Switzerland was the highest trend during these periods.
On the other hand
, the percentage of GDP in Estonia was
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 lowest point in 2002 , 2007 and 2012.
According to
 what was shown in the chart, there
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 eight countries in Europe that had different rates during these three periods. In 2002, the percentage of GDP in
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the Netherland
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Netherland
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 was 10% as equal as in
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.
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 the rate in
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Health expenditure
  • GDP (Gross Domestic Product)
  • Percentage increase/decrease
  • Trend
  • Stability
  • Fluctuation
  • Economic factors
  • Healthcare priorities
  • Public spending
  • Comparative analysis
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