The three pie charts show the production and consumption of tea and where the profit goes around the world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The three pie charts show the production and consumption of tea and where  the profit goes around the world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The three given circle
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illustrate the production and consumption of tea it
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, shows where the profit goes around the world.
Overall
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, Europe seems to have the upper hand in consumption with America following closely after as for production South Africa takes the highest share of that . But for the profit distribution delivery is taking almost half of it .
On the other hand
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, consumption in the chart shows that Japan
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the rest of the world
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a small but similar number .
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production is mostly to the South of Africa other countries
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as Vietnam , Japan and Indonesia take the other half . As for the profit a bit more than 50% is taken by delivery but exports
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the second highest percentage .
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