The diagrams below show changes in Felixstone in the UK between 1967 and 2001.
The plans show how
Felixstone
in England had changed in the course of 34 years, from 1967 to 2001.
Correct your spelling
Felixstowe
Overall
, it is clear that
Felixstone experienced some significant changes, specifically turning farmland into accommodation area
and building beach areas. Fix the agreement mistake
areas
However
, some facilities on the west side remained unchanged after the redevelopment.
In 1967, according to
the map, in the northwest of the map were a golf course and a row of shops
, to the right of the shops
were another line of shops
and a farmland, which was separated by the High street
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Street
However
, for the next 34 years, the line of shops
on the northeast was replaced with apartments, and the farmland was converted into a hotel, a swimming pool, and tennis courts.
Moving South, most facilities built in 1967, including a pier, a marina, and a fish market were turned into 2 beach areas (public and private) for citizens and visitors in 2001. However
, in the southwest, where
used to Correct your spelling
there
have
a café, a hotel, dunes, and plants in 1967, which remained the same after the development Verb problem
be
along with
the construction of wind turbines and a car park in 2001.Submitted by ieltsamiedu on
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