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The diagrams below show changes in Felixstone in the UK between 1967 and 2001.

The diagrams below show changes in Felixstone in the UK between 1967 and 2001.
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The plans show how
Felixstone
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Felixstowe
 in England had changed in the course of 34 years, from 1967 to 2001.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 Felixstone experienced some significant changes, specifically turning farmland into accommodation
area
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areas
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 and building beach areas.
However
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, some facilities on the west side remained unchanged after the redevelopment. In 1967,
according to
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 the map, in the northwest of the map were a golf course and a row of
shops
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, to the right of the
shops
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 were another line of
shops
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 and a farmland, which was separated by the High
street
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.
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, for the next 34 years, the line of
shops
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 on the northeast was replaced with apartments, and the farmland was converted into a hotel, a swimming pool, and tennis courts. Moving South, most facilities built in 1967, including a pier, a marina, and a fish market were turned into 2 beach areas (public and private) for citizens and visitors in 2001.
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, in the southwest,
where
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there
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 used to
have
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be
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 a café, a hotel, dunes, and plants in 1967, which remained the same after the development
along with
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 the construction of wind turbines and a car park in 2001.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words shops with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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