The table below gives information about the USA's top exports in 2021 and the percentage change with 2020. The bar chart shows the percentage of the USA exports sent to the UK between 2010 and 2020.

The table below gives information about the USA's top exports in 2021 and the percentage change with 2020. The bar chart shows the percentage of the USA exports sent to the UK between 2010 and 2020.
The table illustrates the top
exports
in the United States in the
year
2021 it
also
shows the change in numbers from the
year
before .
While the
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The
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graph explains the percentage of
exports
from the US that were sent to the UK
during
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from
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2010 to 2020.
Overall
,between the different types of
exports
electric vehicles have the highest value at 28 billion but they
also
have the most amount of annual change
too
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with
petroleuim
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petroleum
following closely after at -32% of annual change .
Moreover
, in the
year
2010
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2010,
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an astonishing number of US
exports
were sent to the UK 60% to be specific . We can
also
see that as time goes on the number of
exports
sent to the United
Kindoms
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Kingdom
gradually increased as by the
year
2020 number went down to about 40% .
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Vocabulary: Replace the words exports, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • exports
  • percentage change
  • data presented
  • timeframe
  • highlighting
  • significant
  • analysis of trends
  • patterns
  • correlation
  • demand
  • potential reasons
  • economic factors
  • political factors
  • social reasons
  • speculation
  • export landscape
  • global events
  • pandemic
  • influenced
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