The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and marker comparisons where relevant

The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and marker comparisons where relevant
The given graph illustrates the number of tourists who came to England and visited four different places in Brighton .
Overall
,
pavilion
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the pavilion
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achived
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achieved
achieve
a
suprising
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surprising
increase in visitors starting from 1985 but
slumping
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slumped
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in the
2000's
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2000s
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and the years after
also
the art gallery faced a change in the
amount
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number
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of tourists as it seemed to have a rise
of
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in
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visitors
in
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from
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1980 to 1985 but
dropping
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dropped
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dramatically in the same year and
countinuing
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continuing
to decrease .
On the other hand
, the festival seems to have a
levelld
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levelled
level
off
amount
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the amount
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of tourists with a steady record
while
the pier has ups and downs as the amount is changing
according to
the year but
it is clear that
it is climbing
up
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apply
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noticably
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noticeably
from
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since
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the year 2000 to 2010 .
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