The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and marker comparisons where relevant
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The given graph illustrates the number of tourists who came to England and visited four different places in Brighton .
Overall
, pavilion
Correct article usage
the pavilion
achived
a Correct your spelling
achieved
achieve
suprising
increase in visitors starting from 1985 but Correct your spelling
surprising
slumping
in the Wrong verb form
slumped
2000's
and the years after Fix apostrophe usage
2000s
also
the art gallery faced a change in the amount
of tourists as it seemed to have a rise Change the quantifier
number
of
visitors Change preposition
in
in
1980 to 1985 but Change preposition
from
dropping
dramatically in the same year and Wrong verb form
dropped
countinuing
to decrease .
Correct your spelling
continuing
On the other hand
, the festival seems to have a levelld
off Correct your spelling
levelled
level
amount
of tourists with a steady record Add an article
the amount
while
the pier has ups and downs as the amount is changing according to
the year but it is clear that
it is climbing up
Change preposition
apply
noticably
Correct your spelling
noticeably
from
the year 2000 to 2010 .Change preposition
since
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