The graph shows the percentage of women working in 6 countries in 1960, 1970 and 1980. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting on th e main features and make comparisons where relevant
The chart illustrates the
number
of women who went into higher education level in the years
1970 and 2005 for the five states. The units of measurement was
given in percentages.
Change the verb form
were
Overall
, the figure witnessed an upward turn in both years
though it was not a significant increase. Also
, an equal number
was seen in a certain country.
Firstly
, Canada had the highest number
of women which was 60% in both 1970 and 2005 and it happened that it was also
similar for the given two years
. On the other hand
, Japan in the year 1970 had 20% but in 2005 the figure doubled to 40 per cent. For the Germany and USA
the percentages rose Add a comma
USA,
up with
a small margin from 40% to 55% in Change preposition
by
USA
and 50% to 55% for Germany respectively in the Correct article usage
the USA
years
1970 and 2005.
However
, in UK
the Correct article usage
the UK
number
of learners increased with
more than Change preposition
by
a
half from 35% in 1970 to 60 per cent in 2005.Correct article usage
apply
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