The diagram below shows how uranium is used in the production of nuclear power. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The figure illustrates the process by which nuclear power is generated from uranium.
Overall
, there are six stages to this
process staring
with extraction and finishing with buried products, With reprocessing or reusing the products Correct your spelling
starting
instead
of throwing them away.
In the first stage
the uranium is mined and is extracted from underneath the ground. When it has been extracted, it undergoes enrichment and it is converted into U-235 fuel pallets. Once converted into U-235, it is used Add a comma
stage,
power
generators and generate electricity. It produces enough pellets which can Fix the infinitive
to power
last
for a long period of time.
However
, since it last
for up to four years, Replace the word
lasts
which
becomes spent and it has to be removed. After it has been removed some of the spent can be reprocessed and used again to generate electricity. Alternatively, If it can not beCorrect pronoun usage
it
repocessed
or used again, it is put in a specific container and is buried.Correct your spelling
repossessed
reprocessed
processed
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