The diagram below shows how uranium is used in the production of nuclear power. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The diagram below shows how uranium is used in the production of nuclear power.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The figure illustrates the process by which nuclear power is generated from uranium.
Overall
, there are six stages to
this
process
staring
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starting
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with extraction and finishing with buried products, With reprocessing or reusing the products
instead
of throwing them away. In the first
stage
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the uranium is mined and is extracted from underneath the ground. When it has been extracted, it undergoes enrichment and it is converted into U-235 fuel pallets. Once converted into U-235, it is used
power
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generators and generate electricity. It produces enough pellets which can
last
for a long period of time.
However
, since it
last
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for up to four years,
which
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it
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becomes spent and it has to be removed. After it has been removed some of the spent can be reprocessed and used again to generate electricity. Alternatively, If it can not be
repocessed
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repossessed
reprocessed
processed
or used again, it is put in a specific container and is buried.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Nuclear fission
  • Radioactive material
  • Reactor core
  • Control rods
  • Coolant
  • Thermal energy
  • Steam generator
  • Turbine
  • Generator
  • Spent fuel
  • Radioactive waste
  • Depleted uranium
  • Decommissioning
  • Sustainable energy
  • Nuclear proliferation
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