The graph shows the percentage of women working in 6 countries in 1960, 1970 and 1980. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting on th e main features and make comparisons where relevant
The provided bar chart compares percentage of women working in 5 different
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the
conutries
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countries
UK
,USA,Canada,Japin
,Germany) from 1970 to 2005.
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Japan
Overall
,what stands out from the bar chart that
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is that
UK
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the UK
Canda
was the highest of women working Correct your spelling
Canada
while
Japan the
lowest percentage.
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had the
UK
and Canda
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Canada
reach
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reached
around
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at around
while
in 1970 Canda
was stable and Correct your spelling
Canada
UK
Just
under (40%). Turning to (Add a missing verb
was Just
USA
and Germany) in 2005 the percentage Correct article usage
the USA
an
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apply
increase
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increased
almost
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by almost
compeare
it Correct your spelling
compare
in
1970 the Change preposition
to
pecentage
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percentage
drop
about (30%) and (10%). on Wrong verb form
dropped
another
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the
hand
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other hand
year
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years
rise
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rose
around
(40%).Change preposition
to around
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