The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given chart depicts the percentage of the population
stay
in cities in four Wrong verb form
staying
countries
in Asia between 1970 and 2020, with some expectations for 2030 and 2080.
In general, there are four countries
with the main trend are
increasing. Malaysia has Correct subject-verb agreement
is
strong
rise Correct article usage
a strong
while
Thailand is a country has
Correct pronoun usage
that has
slightly
stable increase Add an article
a slightly
the slightly
in
every time.
We can easily observe from the line graph that Malaysia Change preposition
apply
has
Verb problem
was
a
Correct article usage
apply
dominate
in 1990 from just around 65% to over 80% in 2020. Replace the word
dominant
Meanwhile
three Add a comma
Meanwhile,
others
Correct quantifier usage
other
countries
have slightly and slowly increase
. Especially Wrong verb form
increased
Correct article usage
the Philippiens
Philippiens
when in 1990 they Correct your spelling
Philippines
have
Wrong verb form
had
highest
Change the article
the highest
percent
in 4 Replace the word
percentage
countries
with nearly 50%, but then
in the next 2 years it has
a little decrease Wrong verb form
had
then
came back to increase like others.Submitted by mizh.nguyen on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words countries with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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