There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do

Dear Sir/Madam, Every day I stay on the bus
staion
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station
and
wait
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wait for
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transport
nubmer
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number
eight. But
last
two
week
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weeks
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I have
problems
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had problems
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with your transport because it"
s
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's
coming too late and I
pass
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my first lesson
in
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at
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the university. When I
ask
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asked
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about
this
porblem
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problem
driver
, he
sad
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said
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me
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to me
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that his partner was going
to
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on
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vacation,
that is
why
driver
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the driver
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working
wighout
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on
weekends. I have only one bus on my street and I need
in
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apply
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it. I would like to that you
find
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to find
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second
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a second
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driver
and I think
this
variant can help you to solve
problem
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the problem
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with my situation.
I
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I am
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afraid that your main
driver
is hardworking and can
will
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apply
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scik
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sick
. I hope you are looking
my
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at my
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letter and give me
answer
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the answer
an answer
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to my letter. Best regards,
Vladmir
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Vladimir
Belitskii
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coherence cohesion
To enhance clarity, ensure that each paragraph addresses a single idea more distinctly. For example, separate your issues with the bus service from your suggestions for resolution.
task achievement
Double-check spelling and grammatical errors in your letter. For instance, 'nubmer' should be 'number', and 'staion' should be 'station'.
task achievement
You clearly stated the problem and provided a personal example of how it affects you.
coherence cohesion
The closing and signing off are appropriate and respectful, contributing to the formal tone required in such letters.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adhering to schedules
  • inconvenience
  • daily routine
  • punctuality
  • frequency during peak hours
  • overcrowding
  • commuters
  • update system
  • reliable
  • maintenance
  • breakdowns
  • irregular bus timings
  • passengers
  • delays
  • unreliable
  • appointments
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