The given bar chart illustrates the percentage of residents’ coffee and tea purchasing and consuming habits in last 4 weeks in five different cities (Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart) in Australia.

The bar chart demonstrates the proportion of Australian nationalities, residing in

Sydney

,

Melbourne

,

Brisbane

,

Adelaide

, and

Hobart

cities, habituated to

buy

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buying

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and

have

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having

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tea and

coffee

from

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in

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last

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the last

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four weeks.

Overall

, it can be concluded that

,

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majority

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the majority

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of the residents preferred going to

cafe

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the cafe

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than

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to

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the homemade morning drinks .

Moreover

, buying an instant

coffee

was prioritised over

the

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a

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fresh one. As per the information provided in the chart, about 35% to 45% of the residents of

Sydney

,

Melbourne

and

Hobart

were keen on buying fresh

coffee

in the

last

four weeks.

However

, the

people

of

Brisbane

and

adelaide

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Adelaide

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were less acquainted with

this

habit.

On the other hand

, ready-made

coffee

purchases were made by most of them, with

Hobart

citizens ( 55%), topping the list followed by

Brisbane

(about 52%).

In addition

,

Adelaide

,

Melbourne

, and

Sydney

people

constitutes

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to

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a percentage ranging from 45% to 50%. Apart from the above, the city

people

were addicted to the cafeterias

from

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for

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the

last

four weeks.

At about

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63% of the residents of

Melbourne

and

Hobart

went to

cafe

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cafes

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for having

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to have

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tea or

coffee

whereas

in

Sydney

it was

about

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apply

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slightly more than 60%.

Furthermore

,

Brisbane

with 55% of

this

type stood ahead

to

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of

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Adelaide

, in which

people

buying instant

coffee

were as much as the ones that went to cafeterias i.e., half of its population precisely.