The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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As can be seen, In 1918, there was a significant
percentage
of people that lived in rented house
which was over 75% or over Fix the agreement mistake
houses
three quarter
of households. In 1939 and 1953 the Add a hyphen
three-quarter
percentage
of owned accommodation and rented house
was remained
unchanged roughly 32% and about 67% respectively.
In 1971, the Change to the active voice
remained
percentage
of owned house
and rented Fix the agreement mistake
houses
house
was exactly similar at 50% and Fix the agreement mistake
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also
after 1971 the percentage
of owned house
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houses
was became
higher than rented Change the verb form
became
house
by 2011. In 1981 the Fix the agreement mistake
houses
percentage
of people who lived at
their own Change preposition
in
house
was 60% which was 20% higher than households who lived in rented house
.Fix the agreement mistake
houses
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