The pie charts illustrate the percentage of energy generated from five different sources, namely Hydropower, Oil, Nuclear power, Coal, Natural gas, in a particular nation between 1983 and 2003.
This
pie chart shows the portion
of energy generated from five sources in a certain nation between 1980 and 1990. There are five categories for sources : Oil
, Natural gas
, Coal, Hydroelectric power
, Nuclear
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and Nuclear
power
.
Overall
, the percentage of coal and nuclear power
increased 5% more during the period. On the other hand
, oil
and natural Correct article usage
the oil
gas
portion
decreased, but particularly the percentage of oil
declined by 9%, which is the
pretty big gap. And the figure Correct article usage
a
of
hydropower didn't change.
In 1980, Change preposition
for
oil
accounted the
largest part Change preposition
for the
among
Change preposition
of
five
resources and natural Correct article usage
the five
gas
and coal followed next to
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apply
it
. In 1990, even though Correct pronoun usage
apply
oil
's figure dropped, it recorded the highest portion
, and the order of coal and natural gas
was reversed. Also
the Add a comma
Also,
portion
of nuclear power
rised
5% more during 10 years. It means as time went by, the usage of environmental energy in Correct your spelling
rose
raised
rise
the
certain state was getting larger.Correct article usage
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Vocabulary: Replace the words portion, oil, gas, power with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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