The following maps show the changes that had taken place in the center of the town since 1700.

The following maps show the changes that had taken place in the center of the town since 1700.
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The two maps allow us to see the development of a
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in a town from 1900 to 2024.
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, a comparison of these two maps shows that the area has developed, becoming more urban than rural. Despite all the changes, it is noticeable that some parts of the
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have experienced no alteration; like the left side of the town’s
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—the river and the bridge over it.
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, the market square and the church from the right part remained the same.
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, the most significant changes have appeared in terms of roads. Taking into consideration that, they have added traffic lights on Steggle Road;
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constructed a roundabout on High Street linking it with St. Peter’s Lane and making
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Market Street pedestrian friendly.
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, it goes without saying that, residential areas
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as Goode Farm have been demolished to make way for myriad houses and a car park for locals.
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, houses in the north have been removed in order to rebuild more houses and a block of flats,
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the south-east
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,
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of a house, it is replaced with a supermarket and the shops have been extended.
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