The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years.
The circle graph illustrates the proportion of
energy
supply made in France from 4 different materials in 1995 and 2005.
Overall
, France received the most significant amount of energy
made up
from coal, gas and petroleum, which together accounted for more than half of the entire production, whilst nuclear and other kinds of Change preposition
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energy
sources generated the least amount of power. In all types of energy
production, there were only minimal changes, besides
petroleum. The energy
made from petroleum went through a radical decrease of roughly 10% throughout the period, contributing with
only 19.55% in the Change preposition
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last
year. Energy
produced by coal comprised 29.80% in the first year and showed a slight increase Add an article
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by
approximately 1% in 2005, remaining in Change preposition
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the
first place in both years. In 1995, gas generated 29.63%, which rose marginally to 30.31% 10 years later. The country received Correct article usage
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1995 6.40% power from Change preposition
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that
increased its Correct word choice
and
energy
manufacturing by around 4% in 2005. The remaining energy
sources had also
gone through a minor rise by
around 3%, respectively.Change preposition
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