The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The figures depict how the Ryemouth
village
changes from 1995 to now. Overall
, the most noticeable changes
is Fix the agreement mistake
change
in
the northeast of the Change preposition
that
village
is transformed into sports
Correct article usage
a sports
area
that before is
Wrong verb form
was
agriculture
Correct article usage
the agriculture
sectors
.
Fix the agreement mistake
sector
To begin
, by 1995, there was a green area
consist
of farmland and Wrong verb form
consisting
forest
park that Correct article usage
a forest
has
several trees and Wrong verb form
had
huge
land. Correct article usage
a huge
In
Change preposition
This
this
area
was transformed into playing sport
Fix the agreement mistake
sports areas
area
such
as golf to the north, and tennis to the south. The housing was added one house both of the west and east that separate main road of the village
. In the southwest, the shop was changed to restaurant
, Add an article
the restaurant
a restaurant
although
was not added.
Subsequently
, car
park was added beside the hotel and Correct article usage
a car
café
stayed the same in front of the hotel. The fish market was demolished and changed to apartments in the southwest of the Correct article usage
a café
Rymouth
. Correct your spelling
Plymouth
In addition
, in the west of village
, there are two houses Add an article
the village
is
removed. Just Unnecessary verb
apply
the
south, the fishing port Change preposition
in the
also
is removed in
Change preposition
from
sea
Correct article usage
the sea
area
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Vocabulary: Replace the words village, area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 4 times.
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