The chart below gives information about the most common sports played in New Zealand in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart presents data

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most popular

sports

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among teens in New Zealand in 2002. Male and female children prefer different types of

sports

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according to

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the table we can see 8

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most common

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I will compare what style of leisure activities prefer boys and

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in New Zealand. For

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the most popular sport was soccer about 23% chose

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activity,

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the least

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who

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was related to netball.

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, another part of male children liked swimming ( at least 13%).

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had completely the same percentage, not counting athletics, which is not in demand at all. At the same

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girls

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prefer completely different kinds of

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. The majority of

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participants were netball fans 25%,

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only 1%

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cricket. Unlike boys,

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do not perceive soccer at all, at least 5% of all female children

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big

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this

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type of sport

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the chart information it's simple to understand that boys in

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in New Zealand loved particularly not similar

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "according to, while".

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sports, girls with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

188 words

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