The line chart below shows the employment rate in four different industries in Australia from 1985 to 2015, in five-year intervals. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The line chart below shows the employment rate in four different industries in Australia from 1985 to 2015, in five-year intervals. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given line chart compares data about the employment rate in 4 various industries in Australia between 1985 and 2015, in five-year intervals.

Overall

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, what is important is that all businesses except Retail increased in the period of 20 years.

According to

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the plot, in 1985, Retail, which was the first industry that had a good rate of 15, climbed to 23 in 1995 and reached a peak;

however

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, the motivation reduced moderately to 5 in 2015. The second one was Technology, having 13 at the beginning

also

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, it grew somewhat.

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finally

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, whether it is touch 55. The diagram demonstrates the third firm which had a lot of job opportunities was Healthcare;

moreover

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, it had a rising direction because at the start had 10;

then

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in 2015, hit 60;

furthermore

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, couch on the first level. The

last

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one was Construction, which had 8 in 1985;

thereafter

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, the experiment slightly jumped to 52 in 2015.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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The line chart below shows the employment rate in four different industries in Australia from 1985 to 2015, in five-year intervals. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Some people think that wild animals should not be kept in zoos. Others believe that there are good reasons for having zoos. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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