some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects . others believe it it more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification . discuss both these views and give your own oponion .

Nowadays , university students want to learn more about new

subjects

other than the

ones

they already are given .

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some see that it is more important to devote their effort

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a qualification . But really do we need to add more

subjects

and more classes to each student that will probably make them more stressed i don't think so .

However

, learning has become

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repetitive

and a bit boring so by suggesting new

subjects

they will have a bit of change to their daily routine .

In addition

, the main

subjects

that are mandatory teach certain skills so to alleviate

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more we could add new

subjects

that teach new types of

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such

as life skills

for example

and

time

management . 

On the other hand

, others think that it is better to put

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all into studying for a qualification which will be needed for future

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have to agree on . To

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elaborate , the provided subject teach complex and sophisticated ideas so without doubt they will not be easy so it is important to devote your

time

and effort to them and

this

will be disturbed by adding new

subjects

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more stress and will distract from the main lessons and teachings . A simple example of

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is that when

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was a high school student a new wave of three new

subjects

where added to our

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schedule

which ended in many students getting low scores and having no

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to focus on our main lessons

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obviously

this

system lasted no more than a year

due to

the decline in grades so could you imagine what university students will face .

To conclude

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see that we cannot add new

subjects

on

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of the main

ones

so we should benefit from the good side of

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idea by having weekly

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classes for only those who want to join by doing that we will balance the

time

for each subject and will keep the main focus on the important

ones

.