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The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph illustrates the
amount
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number
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 of males and females who passed their driving exam in Asian
country
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countries
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 from 1980 to 2010.
Overall
, the
percentage
 of females that passed the exam was the
highes
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highest
, but the amount of both
men
 and
women
 increased over
entire
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the entire
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 period. The lowest
percentage
 was in
men
while
women
 had the highest The highest
percentage
 of both
women
 and
men
 who passed
driving
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the driving
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 test in 2000, about 70% and just below 50% respectively.
Furthermore
, the second
highet
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highest
percentage
 was in 2010, amount of females who passed the exam dropped to about 65% ,
while
men
was
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were
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 at the same level. In 1990, the
percentage
 of
women
 who had
certificate
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a certificate
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 after
passed
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passing
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 their driving test was about 50%
while
men
below
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were below
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 40%.
Moreover
, In 1980 the
percentage
 of
women
 was around 50 % which was two times higher than
men
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the men
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that
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who
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 passed the test which was just below 30%.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, men, women with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just below" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Percentage
  • Pass rate
  • Driving test
  • Trend
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Milestone
  • Comparison
  • Significant difference
  • Broad social changes
  • Policy changes
  • Surpass
  • Reflect
  • Implications
  • Disparity
  • Overall trends
  • Summarize
  • Statistical data
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