You have been offered a job that will require you to move to a city that you have never visited before. You have a friend who lives there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, - explain your situation, - say why you feel unsure about living in the city, - ask some questions about life in the city.
Dear John,
Hi
I hope that you're doing great, I'Add the punctuation
Hi,
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this
message to let you know that I Linking Words
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found a good job in your city. I'Linking Words
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over the moon about that thing, and can't wait to meet you there.
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I'm
it's
m
a little bit unsure about accepting the offer from my new jobUse synonyms
,
because there Remove the comma
apply
is
some questions that I want to ask you before I start moving to Jeddah. In Change the verb form
are
additionn
to that, I just got a promotion in my current work and everything seems fine, Correct your spelling
addition
this
is why I want your help Linking Words
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to wether
wether
it's worth Correct your spelling
whether
leaveing
my city or Correct your spelling
leaving
no
.
I've heard that Jeddah is a busy city that never Correct your spelling
not
sleep
, and Change the verb form
sleeps
full
of crowded places. And you know how I hate Add a missing verb
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this
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cities
. Fix the agreement mistake
city
Also
, I've Linking Words
heared
from a friend of mine, that the cost of living Correct your spelling
heard
there
is very expensive and Change the word
it
thats
include the Correct your spelling
that's
that
renting
price of houses, and cars. I'Replace the word
rental
m
really afraid that I can't cover the cost of Use synonyms
the
living there.
As well, I wanna ask you if the people who Correct article usage
apply
lives
there are friendly?because I would really love that. And Change the verb form
live
actually
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planning to meet new friends from different places. Use synonyms
This
is the only reason that makes me Linking Words
excitied
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excited
moving
and Change the verb form
to move
trying
new Wrong verb form
try
experinces
. Please let me know about your Correct your spelling
experiences
advises
.
See you soon,
all the best,
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advice
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coherence cohesion
The logical flow of your letter can be improved. Consider organizing your thoughts more clearly, perhaps by breaking your concerns and questions into distinct paragraphs.
task achievement
Pay attention to small grammatical errors and typos, such as 'In additionn' instead of 'In addition', or 'wetheer' instead of 'whether'.
coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph conveys a single, distinct idea to improve readability.
task achievement
The tone of your letter is friendly and appropriate for the context of writing to a friend.
task achievement
You have completely addressed the given task by explaining your situation, discussing your concerns, and asking relevant questions.
coherence cohesion
Your greeting and closing are effective and suitable for the letter to a friend.