You have been offered a job that will require you to move to a city that you have never visited before. You have a friend who lives there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, - explain your situation, - say why you feel unsure about living in the city, - ask some questions about life in the city.

Dear John,
Hi
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I hope that you're doing great, I'
m
writing
this
message to let you know that I
finally
found a good job in your city. I'
m
over the moon about that thing, and can't wait to meet you there. I think
i'
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m
a little bit unsure about accepting the offer from my new job
,
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because there
is
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some questions that I want to ask you before I start moving to Jeddah. In
additionn
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addition
to that, I just got a promotion in my current work and everything seems fine,
this
is why I want your help
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wether
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whether
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it's worth
leaveing
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leaving
my city or
no
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not
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. I've heard that Jeddah is a busy city that never
sleep
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, and
full
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is full
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of crowded places. And you know how I hate
this
kind of
cities
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city
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.
Also
, I've
heared
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from a friend of mine, that the cost of living
there
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is very expensive and
thats
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that's
that
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renting
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price of houses, and cars. I'
m
really afraid that I can't cover the cost of
the
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living there. As well, I wanna ask you if the people who
lives
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there are friendly?because I would really love that. And
actually
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I'
m
planning to meet new friends from different places.
This
is the only reason that makes me
excitied
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excited
moving
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to move
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and
trying
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try
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new
experinces
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experiences
. Please let me know about your
advises
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. See you soon, all the best, Nouf,
Submitted by noufxmut on

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coherence cohesion
The logical flow of your letter can be improved. Consider organizing your thoughts more clearly, perhaps by breaking your concerns and questions into distinct paragraphs.
task achievement
Pay attention to small grammatical errors and typos, such as 'In additionn' instead of 'In addition', or 'wetheer' instead of 'whether'.
coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph conveys a single, distinct idea to improve readability.
task achievement
The tone of your letter is friendly and appropriate for the context of writing to a friend.
task achievement
You have completely addressed the given task by explaining your situation, discussing your concerns, and asking relevant questions.
coherence cohesion
Your greeting and closing are effective and suitable for the letter to a friend.
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