You have been offered a job that will require you to move to a city that you have never visited before. You have a friend who lives there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, - explain your situation, - say why you feel unsure about living in the city, - ask some questions about life in the city.

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Dear John,

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I hope that you're doing great, I'

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writing

this

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message to let you know that I

finally

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found a good job in your city. I'

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over the moon about that thing, and can't wait to meet you there. I think

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a little bit unsure about accepting the offer from my new job

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because there

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some questions that I want to ask you before I start moving to Jeddah. In

additionn

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addition

to that, I just got a promotion in my current work and everything seems fine,

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is why I want your help

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wether

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whether

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it's worth

leaveing

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leaving

my city or

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not

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. I've heard that Jeddah is a busy city that never

sleep

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, and

full

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is full

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of crowded places. And you know how I hate

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kind of

cities

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city

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, I've

heared

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from a friend of mine, that the cost of living

there

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is very expensive and

thats

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that's

that

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renting

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rental

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price of houses, and cars. I'

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really afraid that I can't cover the cost of

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living there. As well, I wanna ask you if the people who

lives

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there are friendly?because I would really love that. And

actually

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planning to meet new friends from different places.

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is the only reason that makes me

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excited

moving

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and

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new

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experiences

. Please let me know about your

advises

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. See you soon, all the best, Nouf,

noufxmutThu Jul 18 2024

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coherence cohesion

The logical flow of your letter can be improved. Consider organizing your thoughts more clearly, perhaps by breaking your concerns and questions into distinct paragraphs.

task achievement

Pay attention to small grammatical errors and typos, such as 'In additionn' instead of 'In addition', or 'wetheer' instead of 'whether'.

coherence cohesion

Ensure each paragraph conveys a single, distinct idea to improve readability.

task achievement

The tone of your letter is friendly and appropriate for the context of writing to a friend.

task achievement

You have completely addressed the given task by explaining your situation, discussing your concerns, and asking relevant questions.

coherence cohesion

Your greeting and closing are effective and suitable for the letter to a friend.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

229 words

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