Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and town. Leaving only old people in the countryside. What problems caused by this issue? What can be done to solve this situation?

Over the

last

few years, teenagers moving to

cities

has become one of the major

problem

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that

people

should pay attention

.

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While

lack of

employments

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in

villages

and there are better living and education in

cities

are claimed to be the main reasons behind

this

issue, there are some effective

solutions

that can be applied. In

this

essay, I will discuss major reasons and effective

solutions

of

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this

problem

. On the one hand, there are several factors behind the issue of young

people

transfer to

cities

. The first driving force behind

this

problem

is

that

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decreasing of agriculture.

For instance

, lack of employees in

villages

because

of

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teenagers are leaving the

countrysides

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countryside

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. So agriculture is reducing dramatically and

cost

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the cost

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of

agriculture's

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agriculture

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products

are

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increasing sharply. Another important

problem

of

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this

issue

can be

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that living in

cities

is difficult.

That is

because the number of

people

who live in

cities

are

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going up. So

food

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industry, services and

another

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other

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sectors

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activities are going down.

On the other hand

, despite the fact that young

people

moving to

cities

is a serious

problem

, there are some reliable

solutions

to it. The first viable solution to

this

problem

is that pay attention

for

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villages

.

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,

entertaining

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places,

libraries

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construction,

developing

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of schools and education.

In other words

,

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the condition

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condition

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conditions

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of living

villages

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in villages

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should

to

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equal than

cities

. Another significant way by which

this

problem

can be tackled is

that

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encourage

of

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business in

villages

. The reason for

this

is that the number of services improving and creating new jobs by moving factories to

villages

.

To conclude

,

although

teenagers

are

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leaving

villages

is a serious

problem

that is

creating many negative effects, it can be addressed with the

solutions

that have been mentioned above.