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The chart below shows the annual number of rentals and sales (in various formats) of films from a particular store between 2002 and 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the annual number of rentals and sales (in various formats) of films from a particular store between 2002 and 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart demonstrates the count of the
films
 of different forms that were rented or sold in a shop per year over the
period
 of a decade.
Overall
,
it is clear that
initially
, people preferred
rental
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 option to buying a film.
However
, after two years, the
sales
 of
films
 overtook the hiring attitude. The VHS
sales
 were diminished and disappeared over the
period
.
Moreover
, the
blu-ray
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sales
 were initiated from about mid-decade. At the beginning of the
period
, the store was offering more rental services than
sales
. In the years, 2002 and 2003, about 180,000
films
 were hired which
was
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decreased over the
period
. By the end of the
period
, the rental business was minimised and was about one-third of its former fate.
In addition
 to hiring, the store
also
 performed the
sales
 of
films
 in the form of VHS, DVD and Blu-ray. In 2002, VHS
sales
(80,000) were high compared to DVD ones(50,000).
However
, the business of
this
 type was reduced over time and
was
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completely vanished
from
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in
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 2006. Simultaneously, the DVD trade was hiked annually,and at
lat
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last
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, it was augmented by almost four times.
Furthermore
, the other format called, blu-ray
films
were
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was
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 marketed
from
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in
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 the year 2007. But, of course, these were the least sold in the store
throghout
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throughout
 the
period
.
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