The graph gives information about the age of the population of Iceland between 1990 and 2020. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the data regarding the
age
of the population of Iceland from the start of 1990 and
to the end of 2020.
Generally speaking, From the Correct word choice
apply
overall
data, it is clearly seen that,
people with the Remove the comma
apply
age
between 25 to 54 have a higher dominance over other age
groups.
Looking specifically at each sector, the people with the age
between 15 to 24 had a
22 Correct article usage
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percent
at the start of the year but it reduced to 8 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
by the end of the year 2020.Change the spelling
per cent
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words age with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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