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The graph gives information about the age of the population of Iceland between 1990 and 2020. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph gives information about the age of the population of Iceland between 1990 and 2020. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the data regarding the
age
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 of the population of Iceland from the start of 1990
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to the end of 2020. Generally speaking, From the
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 data, it is clearly seen that
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 people with the
age
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 between 25 to 54 have a higher dominance over other
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 groups. Looking specifically at each sector, the people with the
age
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 between 15 to 24 had
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22
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 at the start of the year but it reduced to 8
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 by the end of the year 2020.
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Linking words: Add more linking words.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words age with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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