The graph gives information about the age of the population of Iceland between 1990 and 2020. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph gives information about the age of the population of Iceland between 1990 and 2020. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph gives information about the age of the population of Iceland between 1990 and 2020. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the data regarding the
age
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

of the population of Iceland from the start of 1990
and
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to the end of 2020. Generally speaking, From the
overall
Linking Words

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data, it is clearly seen that
,
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It appears that you have an unnecessary comma after the subordinating conjunction that. Consider removing the comma.

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people with the
age
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

between 25 to 54 have a higher dominance over other
age
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

groups. Looking specifically at each sector, the people with the
age
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

between 15 to 24 had
a
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22
percent
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per cent

The spelling of percent is a non-British variant. For consistency, consider replacing it with the British English spelling.

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at the start of the year but it reduced to 8
percent
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per cent

The spelling of percent is a non-British variant. For consistency, consider replacing it with the British English spelling.

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by the end of the year 2020.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Add more linking words.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words age with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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