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The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010.The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010.

The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010.The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010.
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The pie chart provides information about the results survey which asked
poeple
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people
 who visited the Parkway Hotel how they evaluated the hotel’s customer service in the years 2005 and 2010.
Overall
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, the biggest were satisfactory and good,
while
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 the smallest percentage were excellent and very poor in Parkway Hotel. In terms of
satisfactory
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were
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 the highest in the year 2005
this
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 made up 45%,
unfortunatelly
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unfortunately
this
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 decreased to 28% in 2010. In 2005 customer service was poor and very poor 21% and 15%, respectively, and both fell around 10% after
5-year
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a 5-year
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 period. Regarding customer service was
excelent
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excellent
 comprised 5% in 2005, and experienced a more than
therefold
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threefold
 increase to 28% in the year 2010,
while
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good
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goods
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 made
up14
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up 14
% in 2005 and had a slight growth of 39% after
5-year
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a 5-year
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 period.

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