The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Healthcare is one of the most important

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that everyone always

pay

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pays

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attention

, especially

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to, especially

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some scientists

use

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who use

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their knowledge to create medicine or some solutions for

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people

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people's

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lives. Some

people

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think that the most essential goal of

science

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ought to be

improve

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to improve

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people’s

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health. In my opinion, I completely agree with

this

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since

scientist

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scientists

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can help more

people

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to live so the population will increase

help

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and help

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society

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has

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have

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more

worker

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workers

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the amount of

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vaccine

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vaccines

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or more new

solution

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solutions

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to deal with diseases can be

find out

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found

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faster.

Firstly

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,

the

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apply

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scientist

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scientists

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does

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do

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not need to take

to

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too

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much guest and pressure

in

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on

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others

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other

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issues now since they just need to focus on

create

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creating

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more solutions for

the

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apply

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doctor

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doctors

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and more vaccines for

children

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or

deal

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dealing

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with

virus

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viruses

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.

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, in 2020, there

is

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was

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a big disaster by

virus

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a virus

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named

Covid-19

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COVID-19

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and

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this

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the

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disaster

has kill

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killed

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a lot of

people

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but

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apply

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what happened if in that time

science

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can

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had

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focus

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focused

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more or

add

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added

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more

group

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groups

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of

science

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to help each other

to

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apply

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find

out

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apply

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vaccine

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vaccines

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faster

.

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Moreover

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have

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having

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more

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vaccine

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vaccines

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and better medicine is a good sign for everybody, especially

children

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with strong

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vaccine

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vaccines

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, they can deal with or avoid

sick

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sickness

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when they just born.

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, as we have more

solution

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solutions

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and facilities,

medicines

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and medicines

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to deal with disease now

so

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apply

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the

dead

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death

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rate will decrease and the population will

be

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increase. Whenever a doctor

save

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saves

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a person it means that

the

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apply

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society

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just

have

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has

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got 1 more worker. The same

as

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apply

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scientist

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scientists

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when they find out new things to deal with bad

situation

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situations

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in

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people’s

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live

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lives

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they

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apply

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can help

children

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and adults avoid

sick

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sickness and

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even kill the virus.

This

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will help

society

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have

worker

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workers

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and

also

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help the

economic

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economy

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better.

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, the main goal of

science

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is for

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people’s

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health. In conclusion, for a better

society

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with more workforce and

help

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to help

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people

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especially

children

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avoid disease and deal with

sick

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sickness

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better,

science

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should focus on

improve

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improving

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people’s

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lives.