The charts show the percentage of people working in different sectors in Townsend in two years 1960 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The charts show the percentage of people working in different sectors in Townsend in two years 1960 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
The presented pie charts compare data about the proportion of people who worked in 3 various items in 2 different Towns in two varied years( 1960 and 2010).
Overall
, it is crucial that most of the people in
town
B in two years worked in manufacturing
also
, in the first year
town
A had the same trend as
town
B, but in the second year
Services
could catch on the biggest section.
According to
the
town
A diagrams, in 1960, most of the people who lived in city A chose manufacture for work because it had 41%;
moreover
, the percentage of Sales was nearly the same as
Services
at 30%;
furthermore
, in 2010,
services
35% climbed;
however
, both productions and Salses respectively 21 and14 per cent reduced. The plots of
Town
B demonstrate the main job that had a lot of proportion was manufacturing by 70%;
then
Sales had 20% and the number of
Services
was half of the
last
item.
In addition
, the first one like
town
A had a 12% decrease;
nevertheless
,
services
and sales had a 2 and 15 per cent increase.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words town, services with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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