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The table below shows the results of surveys in 2000, 2005 and 2010 avout one university. Summarise the information and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the results of surveys in 2000, 2005 and 2010 avout one university. Summarise the information and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given table demonstrates conclusions
of
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conducted in 2000, 2005 and 2010 surveys about one institute.
Overall
,
percentage
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the percentage
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 of students giving good ratings for 4 aspects in each
years
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 are similar,
whereas
 only
“electronic
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the “electronic
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resourses
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resources
”
aspect
 has different proportions in every lustrum.
Firstly
, for
“technical
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the “technical
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 quality”
aspect
 65% of students in 2000, 63% in 2005 and 69% in 2005 gave good ratings.A very large
proportions
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 of undergraduates gave good ratings for
“print
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the “print
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 resources”
aspect
. 87% in 2000, 89% in 2005 and 88% in 2010 of all scholars were satisfied with
this
aspect
.
However
, only
“electronic
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 resources”
aspect
 has different results. Around
a
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half of students in 2000, nearly three quarters in 2005 and a very large proportion of them in 2010 were contented with
this
 feature.
Next
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 point, which is “range of modules offered”, had the lowest results. Nearly one-third of all undergrads in 2000, 30% in 2005 and roughly
one quarter
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 of them gave a good ranking for
this
 point.
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aspect
get
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same
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the same
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 results in all three lustrums, which is 77%.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words aspect with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey results
  • teaching quality
  • facilities
  • student satisfaction
  • support services
  • trends
  • ratings
  • infrastructure
  • utilization rates
  • feedback
  • university policies
  • available services
  • evolution
  • main features
  • comparisons
  • relevant
  • analyzing
  • overview
  • discussing
  • exploring
  • examining
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