The bar chart details the percentage of internet users according to nation and the pie chart delineates how much individuals from those same countries spent on average shopping online.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar chart details the percentage of internet users according to nation and the pie chart delineates how much individuals from those same countries spent on average shopping online.

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The bar chart details the percentage of internet users

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nation

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the nation

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and the pie chart delineates

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.

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Linking words: Add more linking words.

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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.

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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "delineates" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

17 words

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

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Some students take a gap year after graduating high school to work and/or travel. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.

Having different languages makes it difficult for people of different nationalities to communicate with each other. It would be better if there was only one language in the world What are the advantages and disadvantages of everyone in the world speaking the same language?