The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below

showsreporting

Correct your spelling

shows

the main features, and

make

Correct subject-verb agreement

makes

show examples

comparisons where relevant.

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Jul 19, 2024

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