A glance at the graph provided reveals a percentage of UK teenagers who followed a vegetarian diet between 1960 and 2020
Vegetarian diet
A glance at the graph provided reveals a percentage of UK teenagers who followed a vegetarian diet between 1960 and 2020. The number of adolescents was volatilizing for these 60
years
and
increased significantly from 1960 to 1980, and decreased Correct word choice
apply
thereafter
for 20 years
.
Quantity
of youths started rising in 1960 at 0 per cent and reached a peak in almost 20 Correct article usage
The quantity
years
with 16 per cent. Since then
, it was a steep fall till 1991, followed by fluctuations until the 2000s. The percentage was oscillating
between 10 and 5 in the 1990s and stopped in the 2000s Wrong verb form
oscillated
according to
the line graphic.
In the 2000s when fluctuations were stopped after reaching a percentage of 5, amount of vegetarians grew slightly for the next 10 years
. Since then
, it maintained the same level for an identical period, at approximately 10 percent
.
There are numerous adolescents who follow a vegetarian diet in the United Kingdom, Change the spelling
per cent
on the contrary
, it is still surprising how the statistics can be changed in 60 years
reaching their own maximal and minimal points.Submitted by moon2014angel on
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