The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australiaand the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and makecomparisons where relevant. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The bar chart demonstrates the difference between
males
and Use synonyms
females
in their levels of post-school Use synonyms
qualifications
in Australia in 1999. The data is presented in five main categories: skilled vocational Use synonyms
diploma
, undergraduate Use synonyms
diploma
and bachelor’s degree, and postgraduate Use synonyms
diploma
and Use synonyms
master’s
degree.
The most prominent feature on the chart is the chasm between Use synonyms
males
and Use synonyms
females
in skilled vocational Use synonyms
diploma
– Use synonyms
while
almost all Linking Words
males
held Use synonyms
such
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qualifications
, merely around one female out of ten held the Use synonyms
qualifications
; Use synonyms
males
Use synonyms
also
led the way in postgraduate Linking Words
diploma
and Use synonyms
master’s
degrees – the majority of Use synonyms
males
held Use synonyms
such
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qualifications
(70% and 60% respectively), Use synonyms
while
their female counterparts were far behind (merely 30% in postgraduate and 40% in Linking Words
Master’s
).
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, undergraduate Linking Words
diploma
and bachelor’s degree showed an opposite pattern: 1. the majority of Use synonyms
females
(70%) held undergraduate diplomas Use synonyms
while
the number of Linking Words
males
was only half; 2. Slightly more than half of the Use synonyms
females
held bachelor’s degrees, Use synonyms
while
the number of Linking Words
males
fell 10% short.
In conclusion, Use synonyms
males
seemed to have led the way on the two ends of post-school Use synonyms
qualifications
(skilled vocational, postgraduate, and Use synonyms
Master’s
), Use synonyms
while
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females
stood in the middle in the undergraduate category.Use synonyms
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