The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australiaand the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and makecomparisons where relevant. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australiaand the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and makecomparisons where relevant. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The bar chart demonstrates the difference between
males
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and
females
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in their levels of post-school
qualifications
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in Australia in 1999. The data is presented in five main categories: skilled vocational
diploma
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, undergraduate
diploma
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and bachelor’s degree, and postgraduate
diploma
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and
master’s
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degree. The most prominent feature on the chart is the chasm between
males
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and
females
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in skilled vocational
diploma
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while
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almost all
males
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held
such
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qualifications
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, merely around one female out of ten held the
qualifications
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;
males
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also
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led the way in postgraduate
diploma
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and
master’s
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degrees – the majority of
males
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held
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qualifications
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(70% and 60% respectively),
while
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their female counterparts were far behind (merely 30% in postgraduate and 40% in
Master’s
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).
On the other hand
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, undergraduate
diploma
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and bachelor’s degree showed an opposite pattern: 1. the majority of
females
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(70%) held undergraduate diplomas
while
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the number of
males
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was only half; 2. Slightly more than half of the
females
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held bachelor’s degrees,
while
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the number of
males
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fell 10% short. In conclusion,
males
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seemed to have led the way on the two ends of post-school
qualifications
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(skilled vocational, postgraduate, and
Master’s
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),
while
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females
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stood in the middle in the undergraduate category.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words males, females, qualifications, diploma, master’s with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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