The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, amd planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps illustrate the industrial area of Norbition town that will be developed into
small
village in the future. Add an article
a small
Overall
, it can be seen that the feture
development plan will be changed significantly. Many factories will be relocated into houses. Correct your spelling
future
feature
Moreover
, facilities will be constructed around households.
Road and bridge will be countructed
in the future, expand the areas of the road in the north and the west north of the main roundabout Correct your spelling
constructed
while
the bridge will be added for across the river. Farmland will be moved to the east of the area and relocated by houses. Moreover
, the factories of Norbiton town will be changed into housing in the future, some house
will be added along the new road.
There will be a lot of facilities in the new plan Fix the agreement mistake
houses
such
as playground
, school and medical centre which is located to the east of the big roundabout. Add an article
a playground
the playground
Additionally
, shops will be built near the main roundabout.Submitted by pasineekhanpakdee on
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