The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, amd planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps illustrate the industrial area of Norbition town that will be developed into

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village in the future.

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, it can be seen that the

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development plan will be changed significantly. Many factories will be relocated into houses.

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, facilities will be constructed around households. Road and bridge will be

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in the future, expand the areas of the road in the north and the west north of the main roundabout

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the bridge will be added for across the river. Farmland will be moved to the east of the area and relocated by houses.

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, the factories of Norbiton town will be changed into housing in the future, some

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will be added along the new road. There will be a lot of facilities in the new plan

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a playground

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, school and medical centre which is located to the east of the big roundabout.

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, shops will be built near the main roundabout.

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Topic Vocabulary:

industrial area
current condition
proposed future development
primarily
lining the roads
flowing from west to east
northern border
residential area
housing units
replace the factories
infrastructure
new bridge
connecting
creation of a park
expansion
community-friendly environment

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The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, amd planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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