It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

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statement

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children

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to be educated since they are young. When they are young, it's easier to

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them what is right and what is wrong.

However

, it is not that easy for us as

adults

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because children

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to look at what

adults

are doing,

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and then

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they will copy it. Even if we do something even though it's bad, they will

also

copy it. Unless we

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them that it's not good and make sure that they won'

t

do it until they understand. But I would say

this

method is more efficient

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compared

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to speaking to children when they

already

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are already

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on teenage. Teenagers

tends

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to think that they are already an adult. They can take care of their own. They don'

t

need

anybody

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anybody's

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help. They already know

all thing

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everything

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which makes them feel that they don'

t

need any advice from others.

That is

the

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hard time

for

adults

as they will be in a long debate with the teenager until someone

finally

relise

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realise

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, that would be hard to

accomplished

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since

teenager

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teenagers

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are really

stuborn

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stubborn

. Teenage would need to experience the consequences

first

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before

the

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they

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would be able to realise that they are wrong. Even if as

adults

we

tried

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try

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as best as we can to make sure that they won'

t

experienced

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it, it's hard to

accomplished

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it as

teenage

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teenagers

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are stubborn.

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,

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humans will only learn from

the

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their mistakes

only

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if they

had

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have

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experience

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from

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the

consequence

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consequences

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. Some of the punishment that they should

recieve

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receive

as a child

are

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they are grounded and don'

t

go too soft

to

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them.

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When

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they are already

a

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teenage

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teenagers

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, we cannot really

grounded

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grind

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them or control

as

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them as

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that is

the era where they always socialize with other people,

also

, they start to go out more often than they used to

be

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.

Therefore

, I think that the best punishment is to actually show them what

to

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actually happens if they do those things.

This

would help them

reliase

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relieve

the

consequence

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consequences

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without actually experiencing

it

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them

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.