You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. You should write at least 150 words
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The charts provide the data from men and women aged 60-64 in jobs changed in four
countries
over the given period
.
Overall
, men aged 60-64 in employment in all countries
have experienced a downward over the 30-year period
.
Especially, Belgium increased the highest. By contrast
, Japan decreased the lowest.
Women aged 60-64 in work in all countries
have shown slight
shift over the given Correct article usage
a slight
period
.
Notably, Belgium and Australia have indicated the smallest shift.
Looking at the charts more closely, one can see that workmen in Australia dropped by nearly 27 per cent point from 74 in 1970 to 47% in 2000, followed by Japan, the USA and Belgium decreased over the 30-year period
.
In contrast
, Australia and the USA had slightly a downward from 1970 to 2000.
In conclusion, all countries
have slightly shifted.Submitted by garim4645 on
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