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the table below gives information about the three countries with the highest populations. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant

the table below gives information about the three countries with the highest populations. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant
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Out of the 145 countries in the
world
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 there are three
that
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are
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 considered to be the most populated countries in the world. These three countries include
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India
,
China
 and
USA
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the USA
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. The largest one
out of
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this
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China
, with
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 population of 1.415 billion people, followed by
India
 with 1.354 billion, and
USA
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the USA
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 with 327 million.
According to
 studies,
India
 has the fastest
reat
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rate
 of
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increase
of
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 population with
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a
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rate
 of 1.11% since 2017. Right behind is the
USA
 with
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a
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rate
 of 1.71% and
China
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 the lowest among the three with
the
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a
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rate
 of 0.39%.
India
 is the
most dense
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densest
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 country out of them all with a number of 455 people per
square
kilometer
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, followed by
China
 with a density of 151 and the
USA
 being
considerablyt
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considerably
 lower compared to the other two with a number of 36 per
square
kilometer
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kilometre
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. Based on land area,
China
 is the biggest one with
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 size of 9.388 million
square
 meters. Not so far behind is the
USA
 with 9.147
square
 meters and
India
being
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 the lowest with only
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2.973 million
square
kilometers
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kilometres
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. Strangely enough
however
,
while
 the
USA
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smaller
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a smaller
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 size of land area, the
USA
 has the highest
rate
 of the
rate
 of
urban
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the urban
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 population, sporting a
rate
 of 83%, which is increasingly higher compared to
China
 and
India
 with
the
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a
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 percentage of 58% and 32%
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respectively
.
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