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The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, amd planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, amd planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps below illustrate
development
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the development
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area
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 in the town
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of norbiton
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norbiton
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Norbiton
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 in
Industrial
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the Industrial
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areaduring
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area during
 future .
overall
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it is clear that
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 there is a correlation
to read
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between reading
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 way in before and after .
Firstly
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, according
what
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to what
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 can be
see
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seen
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 the
norbiton
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Norbiton
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 industrial now it
is lacks
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lacks
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 infrastructure . It is possible the river in tend north
destroyed
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was destroyed
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and
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apply
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effect
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affected
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 Losses Material and
human
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humans
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.
also
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according to
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 what
is
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has been
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show
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shown
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 recently the
one
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 road in both
factory's
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factories
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this
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apply
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is
result
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a result
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 crowed population it is possible
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to effect
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effect
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affect
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 accidents in
this
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area
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 . So the factory in
same
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the same
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area
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 it is possible explosion in
one
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 of
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this
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these
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 factors effect to other becomes central
in
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on
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one
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 side surrounded. And , not have any services in
this
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 place and it is hard to live a lot of days in
this
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 place . On the
one
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 hand , planned future development is
nice
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a nice
the nice
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area
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 the river
have
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has
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 bridge not destroyed according
what
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to what
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 can
see
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be seen
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 there were more services and
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area
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the area
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 very development and reshaped it was increases
road
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roads
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.
This
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 place redevelopment and everything
change
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changed
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 and change industrial to residential
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areas
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area
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 and many services
such
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 as
school
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schools
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,
hospital
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hospitals
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, houses and shops The roadway board expected .
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area, one with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • current condition
  • proposed future development
  • primarily
  • lining the roads
  • flowing from west to east
  • northern border
  • residential area
  • housing units
  • replace the factories
  • infrastructure
  • new bridge
  • connecting
  • creation of a park
  • expansion
  • community-friendly environment
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