The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, amd planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps below illustrate
development
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the development
area
in the town Change preposition
of norbiton
norbiton
in Change the capitalization
Norbiton
Industrial
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the Industrial
areaduring
future .Correct your spelling
area during
overall
it is clear that
there is a correlation to read
way in before and after .
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between reading
Firstly
, according what
can be Change preposition
to what
see
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seen
norbiton
industrial now it Change the capitalization
Norbiton
is lacks
infrastructure . It is possible the river in tend north Change the verb form
lacks
destroyed
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was destroyed
and
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apply
effect
Losses Material and Correct your spelling
affected
human
.Fix the agreement mistake
humans
also
according to
what is
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has been
show
recently the Wrong verb form
shown
one
road in both factory's
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factories
this
is Correct pronoun usage
apply
result
crowed population it is possible Correct article usage
a result
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to effect
effect
accidents in Correct your spelling
affect
this
area
. So the factory in same
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the same
area
it is possible explosion in one
of this
factors effect to other becomes central Correct determiner usage
these
in
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on
one
side surrounded.
And , not have any services in this
place and it is hard to live a lot of days in this
place .
On the one
hand , planned future development is nice
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a nice
the nice
area
the river have
bridge not destroyed according Correct subject-verb agreement
has
what
can Change preposition
to what
see
there were more services and Wrong verb form
be seen
area
very development and reshaped it was increases Correct article usage
the area
road
. Fix the agreement mistake
roads
This
place redevelopment and everything change
and change industrial to residentialWrong verb form
changed
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areas
area
and many services such
as school
, Fix the agreement mistake
schools
hospital
, houses and shops
The roadway board expected .Fix the agreement mistake
hospitals
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area, one with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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