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The chart below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six science-related subjects at a UK university in 2009. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six science-related subjects at a UK university in 2009. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given chart illustrates the sum of gents and
laddies
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ladies
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 taking part in 6
science related
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science-related
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 classes in the
Uk
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UK
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 for the year 2009.
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Overall
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, in every category except
of
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veterinay
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veterinary
medicine
, other classes had more men than women. Physics, biology and
medicine
 topped the charts in terms of men studying the program with a sum of over 200. Astronomy and geology
where
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were
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 tied for the gents with each class having 150
participents
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participants
 each.
However
,
veterinary
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the veterinary
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medicine
 class had more women compared to men recording students above 150 as to approximately 80 gents. Laddies scored their highest attendance figures in biology and
medicine
 modules set at almost 200 and just below 200 respectively.Astronomy and geology classes had
above
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more than
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 50 people each
while
 the lowest
recored
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recorded
 figures
where
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were
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 in
physics
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the physics
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 category where members fell short of 50.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words medicine with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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