The table below shows the results of a 20-year study into why adults in the UK attend arts events. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given data describes the motives behind visiting arts
events
in the last
20 years
in the UK. Overall
, the performers have been the main reason to attract audiences for 20 years
, while
work has been the least popular reason for such
occasions. Moreover
, a downward trend is seen in those who go to arts events
to celebrate a special date.
Twenty years
ago, a majority of visitors of
recreational Change preposition
to
events
went to see some specific artists, recording 58%, which doubled the proportion of those who came for special occasions. Meanwhile, going with children or attending for business purposes marked the least
percentage of attendees, ranging from 6 to 9%.
Moving from there, the data on people going to see some performers plateaued at 55% and above until today. Correct word choice
lowest
Additionally
, the figures for those who come accompanying their offspring rose from 9% to 15% in just 10 years
and reached the highest point now at 24%. Conversely
, less
people chose to attend recreational Change the quantifier
fewer
events
for celebrations, as it witnesses
a Wrong verb form
witnessed
suddenly
drop from 27% to 9% after 2 decades. Change the word
sudden
Lastly
, business-related motive
rose slightly in the Fix the agreement mistake
motives
last
decade, from 6% to 10%, and then
levelled off there until today.Submitted by kimtruong270192 on
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