The line graph shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton between 1980 and 2010. We can see
,
that in 1980 saturated attraction was Punctuation problem
apply
festival
. Exactly 30 %, Correct article usage
the festival
while
Linking Words
other
occupied from 10% to 25%. Fix the agreement mistake
others
Festival
Correct article usage
The festival
keep
constant between 1980 and 2010. The Verb problem
remained
art
gallery’s prime was in 1985Use synonyms
year
, Check wording
apply
Use synonyms
art
gallery dramatically increased in 5 years between 1980 and 1985 from 22% to about 36%. And Correct article usage
the art
also
fell dramatically in 5 years Linking Words
on
Change preposition
by
same
Correct article usage
the same
percent
as Replace the word
percentage
was
before. In 2010 Verb problem
apply
art
gallery lost popularity. Petty changed has Pier from 1980 to 2005, fluctuated between 10% and 15%, but closer Use synonyms
2010
year jumped over Pier. Change preposition
to 2010
Line
graph Correct article usage
The line
try
to showCorrect subject-verb agreement
tries
,
that Pavilion made a big leap, and saved Punctuation problem
apply
his
popularity, even in at the beginning wasn’t first. Always be like Correct pronoun usage
its
pavilion
.
Correct article usage
a pavilion
Overall
, it can be said that Linking Words
Festival
kept stability popular. Correct article usage
the Festival
Use synonyms
Art
gallery even was at Correct article usage
The art
prime
didn't Correct pronoun usage
its prime
last
very long and fell like a sack Linking Words
potatoes
. Pier Change preposition
of potatoes
having
been downstairs, decided thatPunctuation problem
, having
,
he should be higher and stand in third place.Punctuation problem
apply