The chart gives information on the percentage of women going into higher education in five countries for the years 1980 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart gives information on the percentage of women going into higher education in five countries for the years 1980 and 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the data regarding the
ratio
of ladies going for
master
's
degrees
in five nations for the years 1980 and 2015. From the
overall
data, it is seen that; In the year 2015, there was an elevation in the number of women taking
master
's
degrees
across four 4 different nations and the only country that matches the equal
ratio
in both periods was Australia. With regards to, In1980, the
ratio
that depicts with higher number of women who took
master
's
degrees
was in Australia and France with a
ratio
of 58 and 50 per cent respectively. The country with the lowest percentage was South Korea.
Moreover
, the countries UK and France share a percentage of 35 and 38 respectively. With regards to the year 2015, the countries like Australia and the USA share a percentage of 58.
And the
Correct word choice
The
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least amount of female students who went for
master
's
degrees
were
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was
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from the country south korea with a
ratio
of 15
percent
Change the spelling
per cent
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words ratio, master, degrees with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 5 times.
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