The line graph shows the percentage of different age groups of cinema visitors ina particular country from 1978 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart depicts the presentation of several
age
groups
of cinema visitors in a certain country from
1978 and 2008. Change preposition
between
Overall
, the ages between 14 until
over 50 Correct word choice
and
years
have similarity
which is the percentage was significantly decreased in 1988. In 2008, the ages started from 14 until 49 Fix the agreement mistake
similarities
remain
steadily and only Wrong verb form
remained
groups
of more than 50 years
that
Correct pronoun usage
apply
increase
, in the same year.
In 1978, a Wrong verb form
increased
group
of
Change preposition
aged
age
14 until
24 had Change preposition
to
starting
point Correct article usage
a starting
at
90 per Change preposition
of
cent
. But, decreased sharply around 79 per cent
in 1988. Then
, hit the same numbers by like in 1978 in years
1998. Another group
, age
25 until 34 in 1978 had lower
number than before Add an article
a lower
group
, which was 80 per Correct article usage
the group
cent
. However
, they also
experienced degradation in 1988 approximately 60 per cent
.
Move to other groups
, age
35 until 49 in 1978 got a total percentage about
60 per Change preposition
of about
cent
and dropped from time to time until in
1998. Change preposition
apply
Nevertheless
, rose up again in presentation. Last
, group
Correct article usage
the group
of
Change preposition
aged
age
above 50 years
become
the Wrong verb form
became
least
Correct word choice
lowest
rank
among other Replace the word
ranked
groups
which is
only 40 per Wrong verb form
was
cent
in 1978. Surprisingly, in 2008 the line trend was up.Submitted by wishmeluck on
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age, groups, years, group, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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