Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to get a satisfying career life than those who frequently change jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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in the companies

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stimulated the necessity of changing

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jobs. It has sparked societal debate

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some

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that

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on doing the same

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long

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beneficial , others are contending that the professions should be changed

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success. I strongly agree with the former view and my stance on it will be expounded

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the following essay with compelling reasons and

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relevant

examples. Usually, the sole aim of

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businesses

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to earn

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, so the managers seek

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expertise as

workers

. Simultaneously, they considered the experiences borne by the

workers

as a crucial aspect .

Thus

engaging in the same profession for a long

time

may enhance the level of experience and it will enrich the demand for that particular worker.

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employers.

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, companies dedicate a considerable amount of

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investment to hold up their experienced

workers

by awarding many remuneration and facilities like vehicles, promotions and gifts.

Similarly

, the working environment is

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factor which decides

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satisfactory

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level of a worker .

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the workplace will influence to create more friends.Admittedly, peer works will be able to mitigate

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most of the issues and it will help to create a

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surrounding for the work.

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held on

this

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received

at the

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to share

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personal issues and

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experiences will reduce the risk of mental

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unstability

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instability

which

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most

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workers

.

On the other hand

, it is commonly believed that an individual should be dynamic to change his

job

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any

time

to find

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suitable

job

for him.

This

will trigger the companies to serve more the

workers

, by facilitating them more. Eventually,

this

may too have some advantages. But , I think it is not a stable way to change the

job

more frequently .So, I still assert that doing the same

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for a long

time

is more advantageous. To

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conclude

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although

the frequent changes in the place of work will affect positively

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short-term goals, I strongly believe that

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should bear the same profession for a long

time

to be

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stable in social and

economical

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aspects.