The chart below gives information about the growth of urban population in certain parts of the world including the prediction of the future. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about the growth of urban population in certain parts of the world including the prediction of the future. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart
illustrate
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data about the growth and development of urban
population
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populations
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in
continents
involved
the
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prediction of the future.
Overall
it is clear that
the highest rate for 4
continentsis
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continents
continents is
the Latin
American
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America
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in 2030 .
According to
what is
show
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recently
the
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Larson
American
the
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highest average between the three
continents
by approximately 80% in 2030 . Compared with the lowest number of rate is it is Africa the percentage 10% in 1950 . On
one
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hand
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the decrease rate between 4
continents
in 2000 is Latin
American
very large Majority. In 2000 both Africa and Asia
smaller
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had smaller
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figures
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average
less
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then
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two
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fifth . So it can be seen in
bar
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chart in 1950
the
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both
continents
sates
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states
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the figures
pleauate
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please
some time increases and same time decreases marked . In
conclusion
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the highest
averages
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average
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in the
continents
is Latin
American
for both years .
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words continents, american with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban population
  • future predictions
  • historical data
  • urbanization trends
  • rates of growth
  • developed countries
  • developing countries
  • economic development
  • migration
  • government policies
  • upward trend
  • pace of urbanization
  • catching up
  • comparative analysis
  • regional differences
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