The chart below gives information about the growth of urban population in certain parts of the world including the prediction of the future. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart
illustrate
data about the growth and development of urban Change the verb form
illustrates
population
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populations
continents
involved the
prediction of the future.
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in the
Overall
it is clear that
the highest rate for 4 continentsis
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continents
continents is
American
in 2030 .
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America
According to
what is show
recently Change the form of the verb
shown
the
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apply
American
the
highest average between the three Add a missing verb
has the
continents
by approximately 80% in 2030 . Compared with the lowest number of rate is it is Africa the percentage 10% in 1950 . On one
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the one
hand
the decrease rate between 4 Add a comma
hand,
continents
in 2000 is Latin American
very large Majority. In 2000 both Africa and Asia smaller
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had smaller
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of less
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a
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chart in 1950 Add an article
the bar
the
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apply
continents
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states
pleauate
some time increases and same time decreases marked .
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conclusion
the highest Add a comma
conclusion,
averages
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average
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words continents, american with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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