The pie charts below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The tables shows how these causes affected three regions of world during the 1990s.

The pie charts below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The tables shows how these causes affected three regions of world during the 1990s.
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The pie charts
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the data for the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The tables
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how these causes affected three regions of
world
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during the 1990s
Overall
it is clear that
the highest rate
deforestation
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and
over grazing
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in Europe think that the population increased.
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what can be shown recently the causes of land degradation by region is that
over grazing
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in two places America and Europe the percentage
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the causes
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deforestation increased marked in both places think that effect increased population of people in different
canteries
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countries
centuries
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