The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
The bar chart compares the amount of citizens who owned a
house
with citizens who lived in rented accommodations in two countries (England and Wales) between 1918 and 2011. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that the majority of
people
lived in rented accommodations in the past compared to nowadays.
Also
,
while
the
figure
for
households
in owned
accommodation
had an upward trend, for
households
in rented
accommodation
was downward. In 1918, more than 75% of individuals lived in a rented
house
,
while
, only 23% of
people
in England and Wales had their own
house
.
However
, in 1939,
while
the percentage of
people
who lived in rented
accommodation
fell to just below 70%, the
figure
for
households
in owned
accommodation
experienced an increase, reaching 32%. Interestingly, both figures remained stable until 1953. From 1953 to 1971, the figures continued to their past trend and both became 50% by 1971. From
then
, the percentage of
people
who had their own
house
saw a dramatic increase, reaching a new peak of 68% in 2001.
In contrast
, the
figure
for
households
in rented
accommodation
experienced a sharp decrease, falling to just above 30%.
Finally
, in 2011, the percentage of individuals who had a
house
saw a slight decrease and fell to 63%,
while
the
figure
for
people
who lived in rented
accommodation
experienced a small increase, reaching just above 35%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words house, people, figure, households, accommodation with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • tenancy
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • proportion
  • residence
  • dwelling
  • shift
  • transition
  • migration
  • fluctuate
  • stabilize
  • rise
  • fall
  • increase
  • decrease
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