The chart below shows the number of passengers arriving at a train station per hour across a day, and also the average price (in US Dollars) of their tickets. Write a report summarising the information. Select and describe the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below shows the number of passengers arriving at a train station per hour across a day, and also the average price (in US Dollars) of their tickets.

Write a report summarising the information. Select and describe the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The table given illustrates the
quantity
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number
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of passengers coming to a train station every two
hours
from 6am to 10pm every day and describes the average amount they pay for tickets.
Overall
, the
ticket
price varies over time and
does
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is
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not
be
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apply
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proportional to the number of passengers coming to the station.
However
, it is noticeable that the cost per
ticket
peaks at 12pm, colliding with the most crowded hour of the train station. In terms of the volume of train riders, it fluctuates from 480 people at 6am before reaching a peak of 700 at 12pm. From there, the figure plummets to 230 in 4
hours
,
then
climbs back up and reaches a second peak at 670 at 6pm. From 6pm to 8pm every day, the data declined steadily by approximately 200 every 2
hours
. Coming to the
ticket
price, there is a slight oscillation in the period between 6am and 12pm, before it hits a peak of 31 dollars at 12pm. From there, a steady drop is observed every 2
hours
until it reaches a nadir at 6pm, selling at 11
dollar
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dollars
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per
ticket
, before it doubles to 22 dollars in the next 2
hours
and slightly decreases to 18 dollars
in
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at
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the end of the day.
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